Wednesday, 18 February 2015

OMAM Analysis words...


Flirtatious
Seductive
Manipulative
Paternal
Secluded
Withdrawn
Majestic
Innocence
Isolation
Power
Influence
Pessimism
Optimistic
Fearful
Naïve
Naivety
Simplicity
Friendly
Concerning
Preoccupied
Trusting
Trustful
Sentence possibilities...
The notion of isolation is developed by Steinbeck with
Crooks appears to be an isolated figure when
Seduction of the men is Curley’s Wife’s sole purpose

Curley’s Wife is presented as being a seductive character by Steinbeck

Wednesday, 4 February 2015

Exam Preparation...

Character analysis
How is this character presented in the novel?

Structure your analysis in the following way:
1.     Introduction (4/5 sentences)  a summary of the role of this character in the novel
2.     Their influence in the novel and how they are used by Steinbeck to express  his message/ themes/ ideas such as loneliness, fragility of dreams, corruption of power, social structure, racism, gender discrimination, economic context of the 1930s, etc. (Use PEE)
3.     Different aspects of their personality (Use PEE)
4.     Their relationships with other characters (Use PEE)
5.     Conclusion

To achieve level 7 or 8
Go in to more detail by comparing the quotation with other parts of the book which are either similar or different. Contrast them (use another quotation where possible) and give your own views, supported by the text.
Useful phrase: This idea is repeated elsewhere in the book, for example when .... There is a similar / contrasting idea on page ...


Point – Evidence (Quotation) – Explanation

Point
Give an answer, explaining the part of the aspect of the character you are describing and your idea (make sure it is relevant to the question, be concise and careful with expression)

Sentence starters:
In my opinion/ I think that …/ Firstly/ At the beginning of the novel/ However, the character changes when… / Not only … /Despite the fact that …/ Despite the lack of … / While …

Expressions: 
due to/ especially as/ which (eventually) leads to/ which means that/ not only …. but it is also/ a central issue or character is/ Certainly, this is a main theme in the novel/Certainly, this character is central to the plot because …


Evidence (Quotation)
Try to integrate the quotation – remember it can also be only one word! Use a comma before the quotation and remember to use quotation marks!

e.g.     This is shown in the quote, “…”
            This is suggested with the quote, “…”
            This is implied with the quote, “…”
            When Steinbeck writes, “…”
           
Key words: After / Before / When … (event)... QUOTATION


Explain
This is the difficult part – analysing the quotation and making it relevant to the original question.

Begin with a basic analysis:

ü In this quotation…
ü  From this quotation…
ü The description of … gives an impression/idea about …
ü This quotation suggests/shows/reveals the/how/why …
ü We can infer from this quotation just how ….
ü This line reveals the …
ü Considering the context, this could link to ...
ü However, perhaps this indicates ...
ü Additionally this could be interpreted as ...
ü This writer uses the word which is important because …
ü This implies .../ This suggests .../ This shows .../This reveals
ü However, on the other hand it might suggest that …

ü Alternatively, this could be interpreted as a sign of …

Thursday, 22 January 2015

Friday, 16 January 2015

Analysis structures for Poetry homework

For next Friday, please complete at least 6 questions in full sentences

I would like to take these in to mark next Friday. So you must hand write the work or type and print. The questions are further down on the blog. 


•This suggests…
•This indicates that…
•It makes me feel that…
•The poet tries to convey to the reader the idea of…
•Therefore we understand that…
•This links to the speaker´s message that…
•The feeling is created by…

•This shows/proves/highlights….

Thursday, 15 January 2015

MODALS - GREEN BOOK THURSDAY




Must:

'must + infinitive' (for something that's likely about the present) or
'must + have + past participle' (for something that's likely about the past):

http://www.perfect-english-grammar.com/modal-verbs-of-probability-exercise-1.html

Must/Have to:

http://www.englishpage.com/modals/interactivemodal2.htm

All modals:

http://www.englishpage.com/modals/interactivemodal1.htm

The Manhunt Questions

Let’s take a closer look
Answer the following questions by providing quotes and analysis.

Stanza 1
  1. What does the phrase ‘passionate nights and intimate days’ initially suggest the poem might be about?

  1. What other meanings could ‘passionate’ and ‘intimate’ bring, given the context of the rest of the poem?
Stanza 2

1.     What does ‘only then would he let me trace’ imply?

2.     What might the metaphor ‘the frozen river which ran through his face’ be describing?

3.     What other meaning(s) could ‘frozen’ bring to the poem?

Stanza 3

1.     Why does the narrator use the word ‘explore’ – what connotations does it bring?

2.     The poem is broken up into two-line stanzas.  Why do you think Armitage has used this technique?

3.     What meaning(s) does the phrase ‘blown hinge’ add to the poem?

Stanzas 4-6

1.     Up to now, the couplets have been rhymed; why do you think that Armitage doesn’t rhyme all of the couplets?

2.     Is ‘porcelain’ a good word to describe his collar bone?  Explain your answer fully.

3.     What’s the effect of Armitage’s use of repetition of words and style in these stanzas?

Stanza 7

1.     Armitage starts a new sentence in the poem here; why do you think he does so?

2.     How does this stanza suggest that the narrator is trying to help her husband recover?

Stanza 8

1.     What do you notice about the form of this stanza?  Why might this be important?


Stanzas 9-10

1.     Why does Armitage describe the bullet as a ‘foetus’?

Stanzas 11-12

1.     What sorts of ‘scarring’ is the narrator talking about in these stanzas?

2.     How effective is the metaphor of the ‘mine’ in his mind?  What does the description of it as ‘sweating’ suggest about him?  How does it bring an association of danger?

Stanza 13

1.     What phrase suggests that the narrator is finding it hard to connect to the man?

2.     ‘Then, and only then, did I come close’: close to what?

3.     Look at the last words of each line of the couplet.  What reasons can you think of for Armitage choosing these?  Hint: think about the idea of things which are ‘missing’ or incomplete.

4.     How effective and appropriate is the poem’s title?  Explain your ideas fully.


Thursday, 8 January 2015

Out of the Blue Poem

Extract from Out Of the Blue

You have picked me out.
Through a distant shot of a building burning
you have noticed now
that a white cotton shirt is twirling, turning.

In fact I am waving, waving.
Small in the clouds, but waving, waving.
Does anyone see a
soul worth saving?

So when will you come?
Do you think you are watching, watching
a man shaking crumbs
or pegging out washing?

I am trying and trying.
The heat behind me is bullying, driving,
but the white of surrender is not yet flying.
I am not at the point of leaving, diving.

A bird goes by.
The depth is appalling. Appalling
that others like me
should be wind-milling, wheeling, spiralling, falling.

Are your eyes believing,
believing
Here in the gills
I am still breathing.

But tiring, tiring.
Sirens below me are wailing, firing.
My arm is numb and my nerves are sagging.
Do you see me, my love. I am failing. Flagging.